Wednesday, May 17, 2023

[Chinese BG novel] 被炮灰的天命之女[快穿] / The Daughter of destiny who was a cannon fodder

 

Yan Ji is a thousand year old fox who failed the tribulation and was bound to a system 052, who asked her to travel worlds, which eventually will help heal her wounds and go back to her original world as she wishes.

Every world has a Daughter of Destiny, but for some reason these worlds were tempered with, one way or another, and the prosperous good daughters were cheated and led a miserable life. Yan Ji's task is to fix the tempered fates of original hosts.

The good thing that author did is to give more or less reasonable start and explanation to Yan Ji's skills. For example, since she's a cultivatr, although a demon, then her mind is more flexible and accepts new information better. But the starting point of her traveling is still ancient world, which helped her use her skills.

Also, since Yan Ji is a fox, she is indeed a seductress, not intentionally. Yet one indeed should treat her like a scumbag, since she plays with emotions and not always stays in the world (yup, she leaves when things are done and the rest of the life is up to original owner, but I find it as a loophole, since how about two ppl who are different, after all our Yan Ji is way different from original hosts).

I'll put shortened versions of these plots, since I'e read three QT novels from this author, some elements repeat, so I was to leave it to distinguish which is which.

Arc 1: Yan Ji travels to ancient world. Original owner was a beloved youngest daughter, she was intelligent and mostly stayed at home. Her original partner was a scholar who later became a magistrate, which led both of their lives to prosperity. So she was supposed to be loved for all her life. In tempered plot the sister-in-law was a reborn person, who couldn't stand working, while Yan Ji was doing nothing. Basic envious bish. So Yan Ji used her skills to make balms and other ointments to earn money, she was filial to the mother who was protecting her everywhere and in the end even managed to attract the original partner (the scholar).

Arc 2: Because of a traverser, a cultivator who practices through s* with men, the original owner was robbed of her partner, was splashed with dirty water and in the end had her acting career ruined, as well as her life. The traverser never capsized and managed to have many suitors. Thus Yan Ji showed up as if she wasn't bothered by the break-up. Later cleaned her reputation, managed to attract several suitors that the traverser was aiming for and revealed the true face of this woman. Who did not realize that reputation in this world is a big deal and unscrupulous behavior will lead you to capsize on multiple boats. Yan Ji left this world to original owner to live with her chosen partner in the end.

Arc 3: This one had a pair of brain-dead men. Original owner had a fiance. She also had a friend who she helped because of her difficult situation. But this friend never appreciated the help, got mixed with her fiance and a friend, both followed her innocent image and felt YJ was too much everywhere. YJ changed to a boss instead of waiting for her fiance to take over and ruin everything. She studied business to become a business queen. Two guys tried to plot against her to "teach" her, but failed to do so in the end. YJ changed industries before that, brought the declinng company to new heights, hollowed out the main company and let the two idiots buy a shell company. This "friend" ended up badly, since she wanted a good life for nothing and could only being taken care of. YJ married a business giant and a patriarch of the Qi family in this world. She stayed in this world (basically, because their feelings were more profound with Qi Lian).

Arc 4: This one had an interesting point to it. Original owner was a pampered lady who followed her partner as an educated youth, she should have been with her sweetheart, but there was a travelling person from the future, who attracted her partner away. She was plotted against and her life was ruined. But the thing is, the one who mainly plotted was her sweetheart, he wanted the new girl, but also his reputation untouched. Yan Ji changed her image, worked hard, knew about college entrance examination and thus managed to pull sevral other people to a better future along with her. She also was on good terms with the travelling person, because she was upright type and was disgusted by the plan of this man to ruin the girl he previously dated. Yan Ji, the girl and another girl who befriended Yan Ji stayed friends for years. Yan Ji became a doctor and other two started a clothing business. Original partner wanted to interfere in the relationship but was spotted by Yan Ji and in her plot had his chsrysanthemum destroyed, yup. Basically she had a good time. Uncertain if she left early, but it seemed so.

Arc 5: This one has Yan Ji who was basically plotted against when she was the most innocent one. She was a famous good lady, was supposed to have a good life as a crown princess, but ended up badly and being plotted against by her biological sister Yan Si and the other one was a daughter of a concubine in their family Yan Qianqian. The YQQ was from the future and attracted people by her novel thinking. YS later was reborn with resentment. But Yan Ji couldn't understad while YS was hostile, why YQQ didn't help, they had no beef. Yan Ji changed her tactic, since she has no promise with the prince so far she acted as a background person, while getting acquainted with a regent (emperor's brother). While YQQ appeared here and there where she shouldn't be according to etiquette, but YQQ felt these are feudal dross, forgetting this could have terrible consequences for the whole family. YS was targetting Yan Ji and YQQ, she poured medicine, wanted to ruin YJ's beauty and had tricks here and there, basically stealing what YJ did in previous life. YQQ despised ancients, but also used poems to highlight herself. YJ did things subtly. She used medicine to ruin YS's face, which she cared about the most, revealed her plotting and made father and mother send her away and not care about her future. YQQ's reputation was ruined after revealing her plagiarising poets and also due to accident she was attracted to another man, became his wife and was cheated of her feelings, so no crown princess fate here. YJ married the regent and had a happy life.

Arc 6: This felt short. But actually left me with a weird taste, since original owner was small and cute. YJ used it to her advantage and dressed like a school girl, I mean checkered skirt and high socks, that type. Original owner didn't want to be a good girl (original owner dated a scumbag who eventually ruined her reputation). YJ mixed with a dude who completely fell for her, they were very high profile, so the rumors of her dating someone else were defeated, she managed to bring her partner on a better path. Basically a perfect and pampered life. She lived entire life here with her partner.

Arc 7: This one is also quite short. Original owner has a talent as a heavenly master, it's a modern story. Her sister was occupied by another soul and was plotted against. But since YJ's taoism is so profound those things are futile now. I basically skipped this when I re-read it.

Arc 8: Doomsday. Original owner had healing and wood type abilities, she helped a lot of people along the way and who joined her base as a result. In the tempered plot there was a reborn person who advanced her skills and found original owner's partner first. Original owner was plotted against here and there and all glory became that of the reborn person. Here YJ didn't car to save ppl, she saved few and traveled with them around, staying a small team. Because here is a supernatural world YJ had a chance to be more powerful. She also saved a man who was supposed to be a flower who awakened consciousness and cultivated into a human. True or not. Basically YJ when she saw the base she traveled far later to establish her own stronghold, it took time, but it was one of the best bases in the end. Original partner was actually the type who joined those who had potential, thus he was with original owner and disregarded the reborn woman. Seeing the strength of a newly built base he joined it himself. But the love line was broken anyway and Yan Ji did not like his type, instead was with her flower Shen Qian. They built the base and gave ppl future. She lived in this world her entire life, their two names were known by everyone.

Arc 9: Interstellar era. The plot was tempered by a person who traveled into this world as a book, she was envious of YJ glory and destroyed her mental powers and absorbed them. YJ instead used her dantian to have the spiritual powers. She became a legend by being most mallable person. Original owner was an orphan of martyrs, no metal powers twist destroyed her dream. YJ was demoted from inner academy and instead concentrated on getting better as outer academy student. The treverser was solved when she got infected with worms during the outing and later was isolated, thus leading her miserable life and witnessing YJ's glory. 

Arc 10: Horror/thriller element story. Original owner died in unknown resort. This place was full of horror, but actually it's a place where many rich and in power sent people whose lives they bought, so these people were tricked to those remote places and killed. YJ due to her skills survived and let the wronged souls avenge themselves, resulting in this secret organization being uncovered.

Arc 11: Original owner was a common person, she studied and had a boyfriend. The plot was temered with and a supporting female changed cores, had a child with ML and had him as her backing. This bf in name did not explain clearly to original YJ and instead aimed at her here and there, though she wasn't at fault. Since he was so bad she decided to avenge herself. This world had no games as the world where female supporter came from, she wanted to become big. YJ traveled worlds and her experience was richer, she stole the chance of cooperation and developed several games, while she also sent virus to those games developed by her ex. The ex did many things and in the end was bankrupted and also caught for attempted kidnapping. His lover spent a lot of time with her kid's teacher instead. This allowed the man to send his mother and son abroad, while his lover came to her senses, mother-in-law and her child were gone. But as usual, she's too comfortable to live easy life with her lover's money and now things are gone and ppl are gone. She was too ordinary and couldn't work and later was hooking up with men. The ex left the country after failing to return in business. YJ lived in this world her entire life and was together with President Gu, their original cooperation partner.

Arc 12: YJ is a cat demon in this one. In tempered plot they were plotted against by ML's cousine. But this cousine didn't know the real reason why ML bankrupted and chased their entire family. Cute story where YJ protected the original male partner, they uncovered some dirty secrets of their family, which allowed his cousine to realise the truth behind revenge. YJ also resister the Monster Bureau, which wanted to punish her for intervining into human world, which led to changes in MB rules. Both lived a happy life afterwards.

Arc 13: Modern world with cultivation element, but main place takes inside the holographic game. Original owner took blame for her good sister/friend inside the game and her cultivation was abolished by a vengeful person. Instead she used the game to uncover the real face of this sister and she was avenged.

Arc 14: Imperial concubine. Original plot should be sweet and loving, but in tempered plot the concubines daughter binded a system, she became more charming and beautiful and changed the fate of original owner, sending her away and killing her child. The emperor never bother and was too into his love. The thing is YJ was new, but the emperor also had a twist, he saw dreams in which he saw all these events and found them weird, how could he wrong everyone and let the concubine act so unscrupulously. YJ was already pregnant by this time and no matter how she tried she couldn't intervene and make this concubine not come. She basically let the things take their course, since she was the most noble. Also took note of concubine and the emperor. Concubine in the end thought of rebelling, since this emperor was impossible to conquer. When her system disappeared everyone in the family woke up, YJ asked them to proceed, since the emperor started losing trust in YJ too, though she didn't do anything. YJ took the throne with her child and ruled the country to prosperity, abdicated in time when her son was capable and lived a good life. Emperor died in rebellion, concubine was imprisoned in deep palace.

Arc 15: Modern world. Original owner had a very good boyfriend, but in tempered plot the meddling of childhood sweetheart changed their love fate. Actually this boyfriend was really loyal and YJ felt it. They studied together, didn't take to heart that this girl jumped around. After they were separated for few years, since he went abroad and she stayed, their communication wasn't as strong. But whe he got back and started his own company to be able to be with a girl he loved he said that they never broke up and they're still together. YJ also changed lives of her family who were poor. Childhood sweetheart never got what she wanted, YJ was easily accepted by the family of her boyfriend and basically it was an easy-peasy world, the main thing was to trust the man.

Arc 16: True daughter story. In tempered plot the time of recognizing her family was different and also adopted daughter played the card of leaving, yet missing. Original owner was a bit immature and was dazed, no real life tempered her character, she entered entertainment, worst choice for noble families and instead was trapped with a beauty trick and was cheated badly and ended badly. YJ changed her strategy, no acting, I'll be the boss of entertainment company. She got start-up capital and grew her company, while she also pointed out at the adoptive daughter flaws. Adoptive daughter was a traverser like herself, but she was too confident in herself and previous success, which allowed YJ to trip her and she failed to achieve her mission. 052 hacked her system when she tried to leave, so she stayed in this world with all the scandals and shame as ordinary person. YJ became bigger and bigger and her parents were proud of her achievements. She had a child, but no man in this life.

Arc 17: 80's. In tempered plot the mother of original owner heard things from a fortune teller and made original owner work like a cow for entire family since she was a child, this made other children more crooked towards their sibling  relationship, as if original owner owned everyone this type of dedication. YJ earned her small capital and managed to grow while cooking, opened a restaurant and a clothes shop. The mother thought these businesses should be owned by her eldest, but of course YJ was against their wishful thinking. In the end she was the only one supporting the mother and the other one calmed down for the sake of getting pension.

Arc 18: Cultivation world. In tempered plot original owner met a girl who managed to invite her on a task to a place she "discovered" where original owner died. The mission is to find out the truth. Tbh I skipped it when I re-read it.

Arc 19: Modern world. Original owner is a pampered girl from a wealthy family. She played online and met a man she fell for, but because of involvement of this man's good friend she became a mistress in the mouths of others, so she never had a good relationship because of these trust issues. YJ never came close to this man when the game started. Although there were some revelations, but YJ had all the things to prove herself. 

Arc 20: Original owner went through experiments in a hidden laboratory, this world is also an apocalypse in which her mission is to surviv and protect her father. Because of experiments she had an ability to attract bugs like Gu master, but she was also powerful. Skipped through (after all, I was re-reading).

Arc 21: The last one was weird. It was about several men who woke up like from a dream and realized that their behavior towards one girl is too abnormal, so they played her instead. She is the original owner. YJ for some reason entered the Infinity game with all of these men one by one in which they changed their opinion of her, but it was futile, since she wasn't attracted to them. Infinity game was introduced by a heavenly weapon that landed in this world.

After finishing Yan Ji returned healed of her wound and stepped on the ladder to ascention. Se leaves all lives and all loves and ascends.

Because I read other two novels in same genre from this author I honestly can say that sometimes I feel inbalanced about them. The character at times feels like a ho and wants a man, at other time the story is more profound and is more on her being self-reliant and not bothered. Since it has no CP she is not bothered about previous men she had, thinking that they had their time, she gave all she could give and there is nothing to be sorry about. But this is enough for leisure reading in this genre. I honestly can't say that it's very exciting, it was normal to me. So. RATE: 3/5.

[SHORT REVIEWS] #5 or first dive into Qidian hell

I have a feeling that I went into a new realm, because things I randomly found on online-reading I have no idea if it's an original source. Or funnily I actually found it on original source, but haven't realized it. The site is called 'qidian'. I've watched several novels which left me with impression that I'm watching a site of fan fiction.

Anyway.

团宠五岁半:皇太女在综艺炸翻了

(mtl: The group favorite is five years old: crown princess becomes popular in a variety show)

(BG) An adult in the body of a 5 year old that transmigrated. Her name is Ning Zhizhi, original was dumped by a reborn adult girl, was lost and picked up to be a child bride for a fool in a village family, she had no name for 5 years, she found that a TV show came to them to shoot where she found her biological brother and a girl who replaced her. System asked her to act nicely and be found by her family, also earn goodwill points, because she is all "evil". Tbh I find the settings and writing of this one the most annoying. Before that I must say that I hate the systems that forbids you to be yourself and do the tasks that you don't want to the most annoying. I don't understand why this is a thing, are people secret masochists or they're on the contrary, perverts that like to read about person who can't help themselves and follow along the system rules to survive. This is not the first and won't be the last novel with such settings, I get it, but it still annoys me, especially when the logic just kicked the bucket.

Ning Zhizhi came from the ancient times, she was picked by a system as a "villain". And she's basically entering a reforming period. Though Ihave a question, why is SHE the villain? She's brought up in ancient times, in a palace, where struggle for power is real, this is an absolutely different environment, social and emotional, compared to our times. It's absolutely impossible to ask for a person from a different time and situation to act differently. The system basically asks - you should act like a little white flower, like a little angel. But ACTING and BEING one are two different things. In the end Zhizhi basically acts like a little white flower, but never feels like one (I've read 80 chapters of this existing shit, I know what I'm talking about). So this reforming has and bears no sense, if the recipient doesn't feel that way themselves.

The other annoying part - why systems ask to act a certain way? Especially when it concerns people that haven't done anything bad. I especially dislike it in novels where people may die tragically in the original world, they come here and get the head start as a cannon fodder, usually all black with ruined reputation... EXCUSE ME, can your settings be less dumb? because ALL the time, simply ALL the time, the way protags solve these issues are not well put together. Not to mention the black material are not even that serious with no evidence usually. It simply portrays people as dumb and believing lambs, I feel sorry for them is they are. Zhizhi might not be the best person, but who told her to be brought up the way she was and now she has to be this sweet little girl, kind to others, while her legitimate desire was to punch the villanous reborn bitch that took her place as a Ning daughter as a metter of defense. I'm not against violence, sometimes it works better, more importantly, this fake kindness may help Zhizhi to collect points to get back, but it's still fake and at times she really has the image of a Holy Mother.

The other dumb thing was about the show itself. It was a live broadcast type of show, but honestly the audience reaction, if real people act like that, then I feel sorry for them. Specualting on a childrens' caracter without evidence, nope. Comparing rich and poor on a scale of who is important and who is not. The show ppl and audience did it. Thinking that village people are all bad and pretentious etc. Honestly... like wtf. It was such a reactionary broadcast and it also felt like people had short-term memory loss. Biggest example, since the villain girl Ning Yuerou put away the sign away and let Zhizhi enter undeveloped cave where she got lost. After finding her people watched replay and found that the warning sign went missing in 3 minutes when cameraman changed batteries. It proved that only one person did it, but everyone forgot it when it came to other incidents, especially when being pointed out by the same girl you suspected previously. Everyone just forgets the events and never mentions them, so I suspect the one who wrote it doesn't really like to handle things or they don't remeber their own thing. Everything that characters do is simply out of convenience. Too many conveniences. Like the barrage reacts is simply convenient, what happens to characters is also convenience. So far, I was read it out of frustration in hope things might change, but even the emotional line of Zhizhi who should start feeling the family love is so forced omg :'D Whatever, really. One can read this if they want to be frustrated, that's what I tell you.

重生王牌妻:偏执薄爷,放肆撩

(mtl: Reborn Ace wife: flirting with mister Bo)

A bit immature writing, but not as bad as others I've managed to see. This one is a rebirth article, but actually after rebirth there are so many things happening. It has very short chapters, thus the total number of chapters exceeds 3k, I never read anything that long but so chopped up.

Basically, this story starts complicated and it feels like a 3 season TV show with 100 episodes per each. It has really a lot of things going on, but at least they don't really repeat themselves.

Mu Wanwan was plotted against in her last life. She grew up as adopted daughter of a loving family with Bo Shihan as her support who always protected her from everything. Later her parents had an accident, Mu Wanwan was recognized as a real daughter of Mu family, though she basically stayed with Mr. Bo who also was taken back to the Bo family. She was ostracized by her family, he was trying to become better, but couldn't help his paranoid personality that desired to posess her, since she was his only light and salvation. In the first life it really frightened her and it also gave her enemies the chance to make a move on both of them, she was basically used as an organ donor for the adopted Mu daughter. After being in the state of a soul for a long time she witnessed his madness because of her death, the cruelty of a man who claimed to love her but used her to treat the adopted daughter, Wanwan regretted it a lot. She was reborn and started trying to build a bridge that was very shaky between them. 

Mr. Bo is a bit of old-fashioned possessive type, so there is allude to r* and a lot of roughness. The thing is Mu Wanwan accepts it, but in last life it was basically violence. Well, at least she makes it work and he becomes better later.

The story development is quite unpredictable. Like there are fights in wealthy families, plus twists of the story, the real identity of Mu Wanwan, who are her parents and also relatives, how tings are found. The overall feel also has this gangsta feel. Some things are pretty violent.

Although I did not agree with many things and understandably sometimes author themselves made misses with things that happened and then they mixed things up. There is a lot of convenience. But at least it is wild. As a result a bit entertaining. But I made a pause, since it's really long.

THE ONLY THING I REALLY DISLIKE IN THESE NOVELS IS THAT THE HEROINE CAN DO ANYTHING. Like she's a genius everywhere. Nothing happened, but she's invited to be a disciple everywhere she goes. It's unrealistic to be that good, especially when she was easily plotted against. Ok, she's a genius, but a dumb one, I get it. But really you may not even have time to be that good.

重生后真千金成了团宠

(mtl: After rebirth the real daughter became favorite of the group)

This one I didn't like, at all. Most of it in general and more like the ending of it really let me down, I couldn't understand the reasoning. The writing is immature too, like a lot. 

Basically it's also a rebirth story with Lu Zhiyin. She was murdered by the adoptive daughter (there's a lot of adopted daughter stories that I came across on this site lol), but not only the same fate waited for her little son.

In last life Lu Zhiyin was plotted against and her first time was robbed by unknown man. Her reputation was ruined and her family scorned her even more. The man who claimed to be okay with it betrayed her completely on the wedding day where she saw how in the place she worked so hard to create her man and her fake sister held a wedding, this was the biggest humiliation. She left and found herself pregnant, she had a cute son and learned a lot abroad, but later found that her grandpa died so she returned, but it actually brought her bitter end.

In this life she realized that she happened to be in the room with Huo Beicheng, patriarch of the Huo family and was uncle of her scum ex. Their relationship started from there. They entangled a bit before being in a relationship. He was inexplicably interested in her and she at first wanted to bring the little son back to this world and later found that he's a really good man, worth trust and love.

The plot isn't new or smth, she was lost when she was a girl, was adopted, later she was found back and had several years of neglect. Her father didn' like her no matter what she did, her mother followed her father's heart and the adopted daughter always fought for favor. Unexpectedly, father didn't bring this girl to adopt out of nowhere, she was a daughter of his first love, even he knew that this daughter had ugly heart but tolerated everything, never knowing that his first love not only loved others, but simply plotted against him for his money (explained in the end). Mother followed like a good wife her husband, but later realized after being told by Zhiyin, that she treated her daughter so badly and ruined their relationship. Adopted daughter clinged to whoever she liked and who treated her well, but she was always against everyone thinking everyone owned her and hated all who said bad things, while overthinking in her head.

Zhiyin was with Beicheng soon, kept it quiet from her family, because she wanted revenge on her family. The only person who cared was grandpa but he was biased in both ways, even after being almost killed by his own son.

Basic slap back story. Again, the heroine has many skills to show off, which I always find silly, like how are you so talented in everything, when did you learn.

Also unfortunate thing, which I disliked the most, is that author offed some characters which also had foreshadowing of living actually. But I also find that it has no redemption factor to characters. Like yeah you can hate, but there is a situation when you see your mother being so shocked and out of place you could have stepped down and helped, not making your mom so desperate. It doesn't mean you should forgive, but at least some of enmity could be redeemed I think. Like making characters who were redeemed and those who were not. I also found it unnecessary to make the appearance of seven brothers so late, it'd be fun to have them earlier. Oh yeah, most unnecessary was the amnesia of ML, like he lost memory and they had friction with Zhiyin and later he really quickly fell in love again. Like why.

Immature, unbalanced, like a sketch, story so bleak that I forgot almost entire plot and read it like few days ago. My memory isn't that weak too.

[update]

This post was pending in drafts for a very long time (like months). I was planning to update it with several other novels I've read, but totally forgot and since then actually read quite few novels from this site. As expected they're very unbalanced most of the time and immaturish, though some were gems in the rough, which were great finds to me.

What can I say, I should have recognized raccoons as my spirit animal, after all I also like trash.